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Author Topic: First creation  (Read 3612 times)

Lordsage77

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First creation
« on: August 27, 2008, 03:50:18 pm »

My first 3D model ever. Constructive critics always helo :) Bran new to this stuff so dont be *too* harsh ~_^
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5L1D3R

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Re: First creation
« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 06:11:47 pm »

Not too bad for a first time, especially with textures and everything.  Most first timers don't texture.  One question though, did you intend the ship to be larger than the planets?
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Kiji8989

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Re: First creation
« Reply #2 on: August 28, 2008, 02:10:40 am »

*claps* Very good! My first creation was a....tube thing...lol
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Tanzim

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Re: First creation
« Reply #3 on: August 28, 2008, 02:18:39 am »

The texturing is very good!
Although the planets are a bit bumpy, and the ship could do with some edge reinforcement.

Quite good for a first timer!
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KiwiNM8OR

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Re: First creation
« Reply #4 on: August 28, 2008, 07:19:23 am »

Cool. Can ya show us some different view points of the spacecraft? Just lower that bottom planet and it will appear to be in the background. Though planets seem round from the right distance they are actually bumpy (mountains, valleys, etc). Well done.
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Tanzim

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Re: First creation
« Reply #5 on: August 28, 2008, 01:28:32 pm »

Yeah, that's true, but the view is from space, "the right distance".
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Re: First creation
« Reply #6 on: August 29, 2008, 09:25:43 am »

Maybe you should subdivide the planets to make it smoother, but a good first model it is! I created a blobby man on my first attempt, good effort and good work, hope to show us the new improved version (If you ever get round to it)
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Re: First creation
« Reply #7 on: August 30, 2008, 03:01:18 am »

excellent work!

my first was a cannon out of a cylinder and a cube.hadnt read manual,or known anything.but  that button looked soooo shiny........................................................................

good job tho, b4 i go into space out mode.
« Last Edit: August 30, 2008, 03:03:00 am by almost cool »
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