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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: rellik420 on August 25, 2008, 06:08:34 am

Title: a wolf
Post by: rellik420 on August 25, 2008, 06:08:34 am
i just started this. im not sure i like it yet. im getting a rough outline then going from there. heres what i got so far.
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: TheCodedOne on August 25, 2008, 06:34:27 am
Very nice man I like it. My favorite part of the model thus far would have to be the teeth. :P (IDK I'm weird lol)

As for any crits or advice I would think the head would be more elongated, but I could be wrong. Keep us posted!
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: hihosilver on August 25, 2008, 08:20:23 am
the head is also much too square.  Looks like a decent start though.  the nose bridge could be more rounded as well.  I'd work on the form before anything.  Get some references to help.
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: rellik420 on August 25, 2008, 08:20:43 am
quick update, i still dont like it yet
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: Kiji8989 on August 25, 2008, 10:22:28 pm
Advice. Look at my game thread. Compare my wolf with your wolf for anatomy reference. More tips...

-Wolves have broad, pointed  snouts.
-Wolves have huge tuffy ears.
-Wolves tails are streight, unlike a dogs, which are usually curved.

And theres more, but thats what Googles for. Hope this helped!
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: rellik420 on August 25, 2008, 11:01:31 pm
its not really a wolf. its gonna b a "hell dog" dunno what that is yet but im gonna make it one. i 1st started 2 model it after a thylacine but that didnt go very far. now im just gonna wing it. thanks for ur crits. ill work on it 2morrow, and maybe get the head where i want it.
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: Kiji8989 on August 26, 2008, 12:44:33 am
Oh, ok. Then the ears still need to be bigger. Or perhaps you can replace the ears with horns?
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on August 26, 2008, 12:55:27 am
At the moment, the ears look like those of a German Sheperd.
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: rellik420 on August 26, 2008, 10:32:20 pm
yea at 1st i was gonna go with the shepard ears and then i thought about horns. im still not quite sure how im gonna do this. and i still dont like it yet. but ill get there evenyially if i keep pickin at it. thanks for ur crits. they r helpin me out.
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: xalener on August 28, 2008, 08:48:38 pm
I'd rotate the ears so that the "cups" face forward. I think the size is fine.
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: spicy on August 29, 2008, 09:09:18 am
Yeah I think that the ears need to be a little bigger, good start. Nice fangs too, but the head is a little squarish, I think you need to also focus on the side of the head. Good start though. Hell Dog? Sounds good (Thinks 'Hell Dog II The Golden Dogs)
Title: Re: a wolf
Post by: trishakarl on August 30, 2008, 10:01:20 pm
nice try.Just some few more months and you will be on topl