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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Darkjesture on September 21, 2008, 02:24:49 am

Title: My first render.
Post by: Darkjesture on September 21, 2008, 02:24:49 am
This is my first render with the scene manager...  :-\
(http://basic4gl.wikispaces.com/space/showimage/Cube.jpg)
What do ya think? (i know its basic)
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: falloffalot on September 21, 2008, 08:13:34 am
Nice. I would play around with the camera angles to get better views.
Great for your 1st render though.  :)
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: headwax on September 21, 2008, 10:47:37 am
It's nice  work , good compostion and the complamentary colours really do a good job. Crit is the background, that diagonal horizon might be better straight.
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: onespirit5777 on September 21, 2008, 05:49:52 pm
Make the background black and add a local light in the center of your object and set the light to no shadows and then try it with shadows/ray trace.

Keep the light you have and just add another light in the center.

Really really nice for you first render.
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: thecolclough on September 22, 2008, 09:45:07 am
very good first render.  licks my first one hollow...
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on September 22, 2008, 05:21:54 pm
A very distrubing comment there... colclough.
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: thecolclough on September 22, 2008, 09:42:45 pm
sorry, joe... didn't mean to disturb anyone... :P  i think it's probably down to a difference in colloquial interpretations of that figure of speech.  in my dialect, it's basically synonymous with 'kicks the cr** out of'.  i won't ask what it means in your dialect, it sounds like i probably don't want to know :-\

colloquial differences are such a nuisance, eh?  ::)

- c
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: onespirit5777 on September 23, 2008, 02:24:55 am
LOL! You guys are out there

My first render was a sphere with no shadows.
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: VBSmiles on September 23, 2008, 04:00:40 am
Believe my first render was the Eggplant....... Wait, I still make them for testing materials, lighting, ect.  ;D
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: Steve on September 24, 2008, 05:27:21 am
Heh heh.  I can't believe how many people have made eggplants from that tutorial.  And I don't even LIKE eggplant!
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: mcheccyb on September 24, 2008, 04:40:57 pm
there was even a competition on the old anim8or.org to make a stylized eggplant.
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: 3D Joe Wiltshire on September 24, 2008, 04:47:13 pm
Wow... perhaps more of us have created eggplants... than robins!

ooh, now i want to see a ruby robin!
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: VBSmiles on September 25, 2008, 01:17:55 am
Wow... perhaps more of us have created eggplants... than robins!

ooh, now i want to see a ruby robin!

Been there done that . ( didn't come out too cozy though. )
Title: Re: My first render.
Post by: onespirit5777 on September 26, 2008, 01:04:47 am
This is way funny - The topic starts off - "This is my first render, how do you like it."

It ends with a eggplant and ruby robins