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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: Zoom on September 14, 2009, 07:13:53 pm

Title: Grill
Post by: Zoom on September 14, 2009, 07:13:53 pm
Hey people..my name is John, i'm boywonda1's little brother. I'm new at 3d so here's my project (i got a little help from my brother)
Title: Re: Grill
Post by: lynn22 on September 14, 2009, 09:40:47 pm
Very nice model Zoom.

Maybe a little more work on the legs (where they bend), they seem a bit knobbly, then your BBQ would be perfect  ;D
Title: Re: Grill
Post by: JakeArts on September 14, 2009, 11:20:58 pm
I would not say the legs need work before I would say that the Grill insert is all wrong.
Dont get angry, its just constructive crit but the grill is a wierd interwoven pattern I have never seen and they are quite thick. Shouldn't they be thin bars that go strait back and forth?
Title: Re: Grill
Post by: Jehovahenker on September 15, 2009, 03:25:32 pm
I would not say the legs need work before I would say that the Grill insert is all wrong.
Dont get angry, its just constructive crit but the grill is a wierd interwoven pattern I have never seen and they are quite thick. Shouldn't they be thin bars that go strait back and forth?

I totally agree

You could try to make seperate parts and join them, instead of deleting faces...

although it looks already very nice for a beginner! ;)
Title: Re: Grill
Post by: Tof on September 15, 2009, 07:11:34 pm
Hello Zoom,
Welcome in 3d World. Very nice model to begin! I don't agree with the crits :-\... this is a first model and it MUST be basic, more details will come later. Follow your way, learn, test, imagine (imagination is everything! ;)), practice and have fun. (Hey, Cool to have a big brother that gives good hobbies idees isn't it?)
Hope to see your art again here.
Tof.
Title: Re: Grill
Post by: Jehovahenker on September 16, 2009, 02:57:02 pm
Hello Zoom,
Welcome in 3d World. Very nice model to begin! I don't agree with the crits :-\... this is a first model and it MUST be basic, more details will come later. Follow your way, learn, test, imagine (imagination is everything! ;)), practice and have fun. (Hey, Cool to have a big brother that gives good hobbies idees isn't it?)
Hope to see your art again here.
Tof.

He should be proud to get crits, since it's his first real model and already looking very good and can only become better!
Title: Re: Grill
Post by: Bobert on September 16, 2009, 04:28:32 pm
I think this is very good for a first model. I couldn't do this when I first started
Title: Re: Grill
Post by: Boywonda1 on September 16, 2009, 06:43:49 pm
He he....see i told you this was ok.Keep it up bro.:D