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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: sgwan on February 10, 2010, 06:12:20 am

Title: newest render of Girl model
Post by: sgwan on February 10, 2010, 06:12:20 am
this is about the best thing I have modeled, the body I did with out using any referance images, did it all by memory. I can draw, so I know how a human body should look, same goes with the sword, the head I used some random images from the net, it doesn't look perfect, but its the closest to real I have ever gotten a head to look   ;D
Title: Re: first realer looking model of a girl
Post by: rellik420 on February 10, 2010, 06:22:00 am
thats a really good looking model. but u really cant tell if its male or female. the best way to make it more femanine is breasts. the other is u can change the hair style a bit more. ive only modeled one female and she was bald. so it was really hard 2 tell the sex.

one other quick thing is the dagger or sword. i think its positioned wrong. try making the hilt/handle close to the body, and the sheith/cover pointed away from the body.

that is a good model. i think its just missing some key subtleties.
Title: Re: first realer looking model of a girl
Post by: sgwan on February 10, 2010, 06:25:44 am
cool, thanks!
 yeah its supost to be a younger girl, thats why. So wasn't sure how to go about that, and since I have no idea how to model hair, I gave her a pony tale wich is hard to see from those pics.

but any way, thanks for the feed back!
Title: Re: first realer looking model of a girl
Post by: TheRetroZombie on February 11, 2010, 11:42:31 pm
Does it have any bones? You should really animate that. Its really good.
Title: Re: first realer looking model of a girl
Post by: davdud101 on February 17, 2010, 09:57:03 pm
That's amazing, better than anything I can model!
Title: Re: first realer looking model of a girl
Post by: sgwan on February 18, 2010, 05:04:24 am
thanks man,  took many hours  :P




here is anohter quick render of her, I tried to "femailize" her a little more and am atemting hair...  probably going about it wrong, IDK how to model hair, but it kinda looks more girl-ish


enjoy
Title: Re: first realer looking model of a girl
Post by: hihosilver on February 18, 2010, 06:37:03 am
A great hair tutorial by an old Anim8or (has now moved on and become a pro): http://www.3dartisan.net/jeb/5stepscghair.htm (http://www.3dartisan.net/jeb/5stepscghair.htm)
Title: Re: first realer looking model of a girl
Post by: sgwan on February 18, 2010, 11:49:59 pm
thanks
Title: newest render of Girl model
Post by: sgwan on February 24, 2010, 07:22:32 am
here is a redone model of the realistic girl I had posted on here about 2 weeks ago.  Ive been at the counter for days modeling her and still she is not finished, but I thought I would post some pics to see what you guys think

(the hair sucks  :'( , but its all I can do for now)

-enjoy
Title: Re: newest render of Girl model
Post by: hihosilver on February 24, 2010, 04:45:45 pm
sgwan: I merged your two topics.  There's no need to have 2 topics going of the same model.  Simply update the older thread and it will come to the top again.
Thanks!

As for the model, it's looking improved, definitely more detailed.  I have to admit that currently she seems a bit anorexic and many of her bones show... sharply.
I would work on perhaps fleshing her out a bit more, unless you're going for that look.
Also, could we see a wireframe?  Perhaps we could help with mesh errors that are showing up.
Good start!
Title: Re: newest render of Girl model
Post by: rellik420 on March 01, 2010, 09:53:25 pm
i think it looks good. hiho is right about the anorexia part, but atleast u detailed everything in the right spots. your definetly on the right track though. ull get better and better with every model u do so i say put as much detail as u can on it and eventually ull know what works for every part of the body. good job keep it up.
Title: Re: newest render of Girl model
Post by: TheRetroZombie on March 02, 2010, 04:19:28 pm
keep up the work :)
Title: Re: newest render of Girl model
Post by: davdud101 on March 02, 2010, 09:56:31 pm
Wow, the modelling is really good! Just a few things:
1. in girl head.jpg, it appears as if her collarbone juts out from the shoulder.
2.There's a lot of wierd looking imprints on her face (Next to her nose.)
Title: Re: newest render of Girl model
Post by: sgwan on March 05, 2010, 02:19:57 am
1)  yeah I made her to skinny, I was trying to put a lot of detail in, but ended up making look like that, hehe

2) the imprints are mesh defects from mesh to subdevide,


still working out the kinks, but taking a brake for now, glad you all like it and I'll see about putting up a wire mesh shot