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Artwork => Finished Works and Works in Progress => Topic started by: tobbe654 on May 05, 2008, 11:07:38 pm

Title: head - work in progress
Post by: tobbe654 on May 05, 2008, 11:07:38 pm
i havent used anim8or a lot, so this i one of my first projects, but i think its gonna be great ;D

(http://0o2471.net/l/4753)

i need to fix the mouth and make som ears.

comments..?
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: thecolclough on May 06, 2008, 09:20:31 am
it's a bit lumpy in places, but it looks like you've got the basic proportions about right.  good start ;)

- colclough
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: Wolven anim8or on May 06, 2008, 09:52:46 am
I think thats pretty good, ive been doing animator for about 6 months and i could never even do that
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: spicy on May 06, 2008, 09:54:01 am
Good for a newb, looks a bit bumpy, the mouth looks a litlle to big. Good start though
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: EcoTyler on May 06, 2008, 05:58:44 pm
Lookin good for a start,You might wanna use the non-uniform scale on the Y-axis cause it's lookin skinny,And try and get rid of the lumpy places,Other than that it looks pretty good :)
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: Tanzim on May 07, 2008, 10:53:40 am
Mate, work on the nose and chin, and push in the eyes.
Could we see a wireframe so we can give better crits?

Otherwise, good work
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: tobbe654 on May 07, 2008, 07:21:05 pm
here is a wireframe..

(http://0o2471.net/l/4773)
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: spicy on May 08, 2008, 03:34:05 pm
thanks for the wireframe. The nose needs to be bigger, it's to small andit needs to be raised a little. The chin looks a little to big as well as the mouth, but it might just be the chin making the mouth look big.
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: RudySchneider on May 08, 2008, 07:38:23 pm
You should really pay attention to edgeloop topology.  UpholsteredDave has a good example on this thread:  http://anim8or.org/forums/index.php/topic,820.0.html
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: Tanzim on May 09, 2008, 08:36:15 am
At least you've made a start around the eyes!
Title: Re: head - work in progress
Post by: falloffalot on May 17, 2008, 04:30:27 pm
Wrap an old mummy type bandage texture around that face with glowing red eyes and you'll have a pretty scary head for a cool horror scene.
Also give it a scarecrow style body would look really creepy.