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Author Topic: head - work in progress  (Read 5365 times)

tobbe654

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head - work in progress
« on: May 05, 2008, 11:07:38 pm »

i havent used anim8or a lot, so this i one of my first projects, but i think its gonna be great ;D



i need to fix the mouth and make som ears.

comments..?
« Last Edit: May 07, 2008, 07:13:40 pm by tobbe654 »
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thecolclough

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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #1 on: May 06, 2008, 09:20:31 am »

it's a bit lumpy in places, but it looks like you've got the basic proportions about right.  good start ;)

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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2008, 09:52:46 am »

I think thats pretty good, ive been doing animator for about 6 months and i could never even do that
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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #3 on: May 06, 2008, 09:54:01 am »

Good for a newb, looks a bit bumpy, the mouth looks a litlle to big. Good start though
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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #4 on: May 06, 2008, 05:58:44 pm »

Lookin good for a start,You might wanna use the non-uniform scale on the Y-axis cause it's lookin skinny,And try and get rid of the lumpy places,Other than that it looks pretty good :)
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Tanzim

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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #5 on: May 07, 2008, 10:53:40 am »

Mate, work on the nose and chin, and push in the eyes.
Could we see a wireframe so we can give better crits?

Otherwise, good work
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tobbe654

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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #6 on: May 07, 2008, 07:21:05 pm »

here is a wireframe..

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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #7 on: May 08, 2008, 03:34:05 pm »

thanks for the wireframe. The nose needs to be bigger, it's to small andit needs to be raised a little. The chin looks a little to big as well as the mouth, but it might just be the chin making the mouth look big.
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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #8 on: May 08, 2008, 07:38:23 pm »

You should really pay attention to edgeloop topology.  UpholsteredDave has a good example on this thread:  http://anim8or.org/forums/index.php/topic,820.0.html
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Tanzim

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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #9 on: May 09, 2008, 08:36:15 am »

At least you've made a start around the eyes!
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falloffalot

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Re: head - work in progress
« Reply #10 on: May 17, 2008, 04:30:27 pm »

Wrap an old mummy type bandage texture around that face with glowing red eyes and you'll have a pretty scary head for a cool horror scene.
Also give it a scarecrow style body would look really creepy.
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