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thecolclough:

--- Quote from: rellik420 on August 04, 2008, 02:11:32 pm ---dont know how 2 edit ...
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you want to use the Modify button, which is found at the top-right corner of your post, see attached pic

;D

- colclough

rellik420:
thanks i figured it out, i was lookin for an edit button.

Dosser:
I think the abs look great. Not sure how realistic they are: but they have the look to them. Perhaps because of the imperfections (looks a little lumpy), I think it actually improves the look: looks masculine and strong. The arms also look quite strong with the veins bulging out.

Overall, it does a great 'bag of walnuts', steroid abusing or President Schwarzenegger sort of look. Great job.

hihosilver:
It looks a bit square to me and there are some very unnatural sections too it, but it's good for a beginner.
The topology is starting to get there but you have a lot of "n-gons" which are faces that have more than 4 vertices/edges which don't ever tend to be a good thing.  Occasionally you can use them, but most of the time they mess with the model.  It's the same with triangles, they can be used, but you need to know how to use them.  Quads (2 sided polygons) are the best.
It also seems you have too many faces.  Since you're using a subdivision object, you don't need as many faces to smooth things out since it does it for you.  I'd advise getting rid of a lot of the loops that go through and simplifying things which will make for a smoother mesh.

rellik420:
thanks guys
im goin for a cartoonish realism. if that makes any sense. i want to exagerate everything. im gonna keep tweaking everything as i go. and i know what u mean hiho. i keep deleteing lines and edges so i dont have those tirangles, and n gons. but i can always come back 2 it even when im finished. thats the cool thing about this 3d stuff. u only have to make the model once.

heres where im at now. mirrored and subdivided.

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