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The Blue Box

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3D Joe Wiltshire:
Ok, just made this out of boredom, anything i could do to improve it?

A few things i can think of:

Less reflective blue box, looks transparent (Need help with attributes)
And possibly tiling the walls aswell.

C+C Appreciated Muchly.
I was going for the polished, crystal, shiny look with the tiles... think i might need to change them a little bit.

Mactetra:
would maybe look a bit more realistic if the lid was leaning a bit forward. and maybe give it a.. uhm, a fold on the end of the lid.. like this:

3D Joe Wiltshire:
Yeah... I thought it looked a bit rigid... and static.

Gonna wait till i've improved it a few times before rendering again.

Also, any idea how i can get a very shiny whitish, bleached look?
The material properties:

amb: 0.300
diff: 0.700
spec: 0.200
emm: 0.000
rough: 32
brill: 1

I don't use materials much

thecolclough:
the gaps between the tiles are a bit deep.  i'd suggest making them narrower, and maybe also grouting them.  maybe also give the walls a different texture to the floor, or at least a different colour.

i also agree it would be good to make the box less shiny.

not a bad start, though ;)

- c

3D Joe Wiltshire:
Grouting? I'm not up with all the technical terms :P

At the moment i like the curve on the tiles... might just be a difference of taste.

Every comment helps.

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