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Room with a view - I think it's finished
onespirit5777:
Let me know guys what you would like to see.
The AA was set to 4 - When I'm done with all the touch up it will be set to 64 for the final render
floyd86:
That's what i mean. Nice shading, good use of textures. Only the mirror on the wall doesn't seem to fit in, to my opinion. Maybe a simple wall with a painting hanging, or something like that.
onespirit5777:
I'm not happy with the celling
Francesco:
It's really nice that we can ask you the changes to make, thank you Onespirit.
Here are my thoughts - I see that you take the comments in the good way so I'll tell it straight.
I don't like the contrast between the indoor and outdoor colors, the outdoor looks very realistic, with that touch of haze in the balcony that recalls the dawn or the twilight. On the contrary the indoors are crystal clear and shiny... that punches my eye.
The small opening in the balcony's wall makes me think that either the passage is too narrow or the tiles on the floor are simply huge. I would make that opening a bit wider, making the tiles a bit smaller. Eventually you could think about arranging the tiles in a diagonal manner, have a shot at it to see the effect.
One thing I like very much in your renders are the multifaceted mirrors at the walls. Have you tried displacing a bit each mirror, so that the overall reflection gets a bit messed up like a mosaic? that could be a nice addon too. Try also making those mirror tiles a bit larger.
I'd like to add a couple more of ideas, I think I'll post them after the dinner. Hope you like the suggestions so far.
Keep on, you're working on very nice stills.
3D Joe Wiltshire:
To my eye it looks perfect, i'd love a screensaver of that, basic fog in the distance, and possibly a bird flying in the background occasionally... very peaceful, i imagine it as near the sea... with the calm washing sounds...
To me at the moment, the tiles remind me of a public swimming pool...
a very classy swimming pool, but a swimming pool none the less.
Great work, I love your stills, have you seen 'The Still Room' Forum on animanon?
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