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ENSONIQ5:
That is a really excellent piece of modelling floyd86.  I have commented before on your excellent attention to detail, and it is certainly not lacking in this image, from the louvres in the overhead fluorescents and the ceiling fans to the knot in the rope holding the anvil (looks a little loose that knot, but having gone to the trouble to model it you will get NO criticism of it from me!).  The rope attached to the robot's back could arc a little more fluidly to the floor, and might need to be textured in a brightish colour for the visual joke (robot pulls out pin, anvil falls crushing robot) to be clear.  I think this is already one of the best things produced with Anim8or and I think the final beauty render will no doubt earn a place in the gallery.

floyd86:
@ENSONIQ5:Thanks for the comment.


--- Quote from: ENSONIQ5 on January 08, 2009, 08:34:17 pm ---I have commented before on your excellent attention to detail, and it is certainly not lacking in this image, from the louvres in the overhead fluorescents and the ceiling fans to the knot in the rope holding the anvil (looks a little loose that knot, but having gone to the trouble to model it you will get NO criticism of it from me!).  The rope attached to the robot's back could arc a little more fluidly to the floor, and might need to be textured in a brightish colour for the visual joke (robot pulls out pin, anvil falls crushing robot) to be clear.

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I really liked modelling all the details, most of them can't even be seen that good. It's good to know that you saw them and i didn't do it for nothing ;D. The knot in the rope is indeed a bit loose, but it's a hell of a job to get it right  ;).
As for the rope on the robot's back: Thanks for noticing. I forgot to place it in a little arch.


--- Quote from: ENSONIQ5 on January 08, 2009, 08:34:17 pm ---I think this is already one of the best things produced with Anim8or and I think the final beauty render will no doubt earn a place in the gallery.

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Isn't that too much honour for me: two images in the gallery  :D
Let's first wait how the final turns out, shall we?

floyd86:
I worked on some textures. Just trying out how it will look, nothing final yet.

thecolclough:
gaah!  no no no!  the red and blue look terrible, and they completely distract the eye away from what should be the focal elements.  the earlier renders look fantastic, but the saturated colours are a massive step in the wrong direction.  if you tone down the colours by about 80%, it could look good, but that last render looks to me like some 2-year-old has come along with a box of crayons and scrawled over your beautiful picture.

okay, i'm now officially finished overreacting ;D

- c

floyd86:

--- Quote from: thecolclough on January 14, 2009, 04:34:16 pm ---gaah!  no no no!  the red and blue look terrible, and they completely distract the eye away from what should be the focal elements.  the earlier renders look fantastic, but the saturated colours are a massive step in the wrong direction.  if you tone down the colours by about 80%, it could look good, but that last render looks to me like some 2-year-old has come along with a box of crayons and scrawled over your beautiful picture.

okay, i'm now officially finished overreacting ;D

- c

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Thanks for comparing me with a 2 year old ;D, it made my day.
You haven't seen the final yet ;), most of the things aren't textured (properly) yet. The lastest renders look great though. I'm going keep them for myself right now, but soon i will post some progress ( or a final!).

Good to have you back though.

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