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Indian8or:
Nice cute bird lynn.  You have done excellent work in texturing.  I have only one suggestion.  The clip shows the bird flying from balcony floor to balustrade, but the bird is flying too slowly from one place to another.  In short, the movement looks artificial.  My suggestion is make it more quicker i.e. make the flapping of wings faster and movement from floor to balustrade quicker.

headwax:
I agree. having the bird go up and down slightly with each wing beat as well. And direction changes need changes in the tail feather (they spread out to give more air grip).

picky picky :)

depends on the style you want

Gus:
nice :D, i think it would be nicer if You add a gradient for the sky :)

lynn22:
Thank you guys, much appreciated.

However, as I said before, the animation is made to fit the music and if some action seems slow it's because the music demands it and when played together it looks good :)

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