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ENSONIQ5:
I thought that was excellent!  I have seen so few animations that try to actually tell a story that when one comes along it tends to stand out.  I liked the concept, and the animation was excellent for the most part.  A story like this is told equally well with complex or simple models, and the story came across perfectly.  There were a few moments of brilliance, such as the character being started by the lamp upon awakening - the rapid camera motion perfectly conveyed the shock.

Like previously mentioned, it was a bit dark, and I totally agree with Lynn22's lighting suggestions above (more for future projects if you are done with this one, I totally understand about the need to move on to other things!).  The model of the main character could have been a little more refined.  I think the lack of hands, and the sharply cut off ends of his arms, creeped me out a bit, and it distracted me from the action a little.  Perhaps a tapering of the arms at the end, and another bend where the wrist would be, would have been enough to prevent this.

I really enjoyed watching this, and I know we will see excellent things from you in the future!

H.:
Sorry for my late response.
I'm glad you like it!
When I began to work with this figure it was more a test object than a character, so I didn't cared about things looking cut off. Afterwards I propably was so used that look, that I didn't cared either.
I actually was planing to add hands for my next project!

Lama:
witzige story.

Maybe you could take up the theme with colored objects.

Steve:
That's pretty funny, H.  Nice work.

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