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Elf/Leopard/Eagle/Steam Punk/X-wing/Halls of Fury WIP

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spicy:
I like the cat you got there! It reminds me of Oblivion, nice terrian to. I also like the eagle in the background as well. Keep up the good work. :)

headwax:
Thanks Floyd and Spicy for commenting.

Floyd: I agree with the motion blur being too extreme. I think just a little around the paws of the cat to make it seem like fast motion. At the moment it looks like a bad dream.

Also the dof is a good idea - should concentrate the viewer's attention on the foreground and add a sense of depth.

Spicy: I'll check oblivion. Looks interesting :) A more eagle like eagle is a great idea. Maybe I can fit him into the foreground as well....

I have a vague idea I'll turn this into a pseudo book cover: "Invasion of The Elven Lords" or similar.

anyone think the elve's left arm (on our right) is a bit weird, not straight enough perhaps?

thanks again

edit I can see where I have left a straight edge at top right with messy transmapping  that needs to be removed.

headwax:
Spicy gave me the idea of including an eagle so I started on him a few days ago...

First image, I identified all the parts of the mesh with different materials to make it easier to unwrap in UV mapper pro (thanks Raxx :) )

headwax:
He has a ridge down his sternum from extrapolating the head mesh and keeping the lines too close to each other so I'd better fix that ....

The texturing on the toes is a bit rough but maybe I can get away with it, and the join at the neck between the neck feathers and the chest feathers is a bit straight. Eventually I might add a transmap to add more feathering to the tail and wing edges....

headwax:
and he needs a bit of feathering around that straight edg at his beak !

Here he is in situ...

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