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[ COMPLETE ] Challenge #1: Model a Bench

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RudySchneider:

--- Quote from: Kubajzz on March 29, 2009, 04:52:36 pm ---... But I checked the UV map and it is actually parallel...
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Silly me.  Now I notice the vanishing point that everything shares!

headwax:
Incred-ible stuff coming out of this thread. I'd modelled a broken down bench like the one in our yard, but if seeing Kubbajzz'work I think I will keep mine to mineself :)

In oz we have these benches made out of bits of branches etc so I did one of those. Fnal render Carrara. DOf photoshoppe/
 All meshes anim8or.

I'll put in a n elf when I get a chance....

$imon:
Benches made out of branches? wow you must not have a lot of heavy people there eh? haha.

Nice render though headwax, i like the leaves too.
Seems like there already was an elf there, but left his shoes??

ENSONIQ5:
No, plenty of us Aussie are amply proportioned, but we have really, really strong branches!

Actually, I suspect this bench would be of the decorative, rather than functional persuasion.  Excellent render Headwax!

Kubajzz:  Absolutely awesome, I particularly love the cracked asphalt texture.  The only thing I could suggest would be to make the break in the rearmost seat plank a bit less clean, like the timber has split along the grain.  Hey, you don't leave me much to criticise, so I am reduced to nitpicking!

$imon:  Also awesome, I love the modern design of the bench.  Again, only a minor quibble on the beauty render.  The floor texture looks a little coarse and rustic for a museum's parquetry floor.  My suggestion would be to reduce the size of the texture a bit, making the individual timber elements of the design smaller and finer, and giving it a bit of a reflective sheen to suggest a couple of layers of varnish.  The lighting is absolutely superb, as is the camera position and zoom setting.  The stark lighting makes it feel very "indoorsy" and the attention to detail is excellent.

You blokes make me want to put my bench in a bit of a setting!

Kubajzz:
Wow, great work Simon! I like how this scene turned out, the lighting is really awesome!

Nice one Headwax! I like the design and the textures are great, not speaking about the grass! (I wonder how you did that ::)) Well done!


--- Quote from: RnDr FOX ---@kub, yea maybe you cam add some cigarette butts on the ground and maybe a broken beer bottle or two?

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haha, actually there are several cigarette butts (6 if I remember ;)) and there is a piece of a broken bottle on the left, but none of these things turned out very nice so they are kinda hidden ;D

Thank you all for the feedback :) I think my scene is still far from perfect, but uh... maybe I'll improve it some day, not now :P

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