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Zoom:
Hey people..my name is John, i'm boywonda1's little brother. I'm new at 3d so here's my project (i got a little help from my brother)

lynn22:
Very nice model Zoom.

Maybe a little more work on the legs (where they bend), they seem a bit knobbly, then your BBQ would be perfect  ;D

JakeArts:
I would not say the legs need work before I would say that the Grill insert is all wrong.
Dont get angry, its just constructive crit but the grill is a wierd interwoven pattern I have never seen and they are quite thick. Shouldn't they be thin bars that go strait back and forth?

Jehovahenker:

--- Quote from: JakeArts on September 14, 2009, 07:20:58 pm ---I would not say the legs need work before I would say that the Grill insert is all wrong.
Dont get angry, its just constructive crit but the grill is a wierd interwoven pattern I have never seen and they are quite thick. Shouldn't they be thin bars that go strait back and forth?

--- End quote ---

I totally agree

You could try to make seperate parts and join them, instead of deleting faces...

although it looks already very nice for a beginner! ;)

Tof:
Hello Zoom,
Welcome in 3d World. Very nice model to begin! I don't agree with the crits :-\... this is a first model and it MUST be basic, more details will come later. Follow your way, learn, test, imagine (imagination is everything! ;)), practice and have fun. (Hey, Cool to have a big brother that gives good hobbies idees isn't it?)
Hope to see your art again here.
Tof.

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