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Mocha Girl
Arik_the_Red:
Funny I see someone else showing a model of a girl... and I thought I'd share one I'm working on...
First, the real girl... She serves my daily "double mocha breve"...
Then, the model, work in progress... I am really procrastinating on the hair, as I am not sure what to do that way... but the girl is intended to look cartoon-ish to some degree.
hihosilver:
Good start, I wish the girls at Starbucks were dressed like that ;)
Onto the model, I think you're doing a great job. The body is especially well done. I think the face could use a bit of work though. The cheeks are indented a bit too much, which makes her look anorexic almost. The lips could also be a little more subtle, especially around the corners of the mouth (the center is fine.) The brows also make her look a bit evil/devilish. they could use a lift to make her seem happier.
As I said though, great start on the body, it looks like some solid modeling!
Keep it up!
Arik_the_Red:
thanks, hiho... good crits all!
Come up to Chehalis and I'll introduce ya to Jen!
rellik420:
yea i agree. the body is lookin great. the head doesnt look so great. ive tried 2 make a cartoony head a few times and failed. but from what ive figured out. all the loops are the same as a realistic head. everything is more exagerated and stylized. if i were u id make a few different heads and pick the one u like best. the body is next to perfect.
Arik_the_Red:
yeah, the girl's head is the real challenge in this endeavor. Getting the cheeks and jaw right... I originally had her too wide there, and now smashed in too narrow. Her head and body are actually low-poly, and then the final effect seen in the image above is after subdividing, so I was pretty surprised at how well formed the body came out as a result.
I added Jen's close-up face shot to the first message for better reference.
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