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Project:"The Mission"

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BMattster:
Hey, this is a project I've been working on from time to time.
PLEASE tell me on ways I can improve.
Thanks! ;D

Link to the video:

kreator:
Looking good for a first project Matthew,could add some detail to those planes then zoom into them a little more ...
but good so far.


Edit: was looking at the animation at work so couldnt really see what it was but now i can see its a space scene!! might help with a starfield. Is the planet Earth? if so an earth texture wouldn`t go a miss.

Try using VirtualDub for compositing instead of the trial avs (virtuladub is free and does not have an annoying watermark!)

neirao:
Very cool BMattster :)
congratulations!

Bugtrooper:
Tryout some particle effects from terrani8or. They are easy to use and makes things look more realistic.

Janro:
Good job. I like your camera work. The panning and timing work just right. Like the others mentioned, you could find textures that would make the planet nicer and the space background could use a stars.

Keep it up :D

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