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WIP: Dead end road.

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floyd86:
Here a little project I'm working on. I suppose to be a small dirty alley. Still not done thought. I need to work on the background and the lighting.

Two Test renders:

-Day time-

[img=http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/8908/deadendroad002zy6.th.jpg]

-Night time-

[img=http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/207/deadendroad003il3.th.jpg]

C&C welcome.

hihosilver:
That's a great start to a scene.  You're doing a very good job on texturing the scene.  As you said, you need to work on the background, I do agree with that.  Second, with the lighting, I advise you put in a little bit of color.  That means for the nighttime you make the light slightly blue.  For daytime, it depends on the feel you want.  For a warmer feel you would go for a yellowish tint.  These lights don't have to have strong colors of course, just give a tint of the color.

ENSONIQ5:
Nice grungy textures, especially the wall on the left with the graffiti.  Only problem I can see, with such a great set of textures on the walls and the downpipe, the ground looks a little too clean and perfect, almost like a raked Japanese garden.  I would suggest a filthier, greasier ground texture, maybe with a bit of litter like cigarette butts & newspaper pages.  Maybe a puddle or two, although that opens a whole can of worms with reflections if rendering in Anim8or.  Excellent job though, I love the photo-realism.

phantom king:
wow, very nice, awsome textures, well done :)

Tanzim:
cool
but as you said, you need to work on the back ground,  currently it looks like theres a big black wall there
also in the night scene the pipe casts a shadow which i see is quite odd as theres no visible light source, i recommend adding a moon (in the background) or a lamp post

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