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[ COMPLETE ] Challenge #29: GIANT ROBOTS!!!

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CoriDavis:

--- Quote from: davdud101 on May 14, 2012, 05:17:07 pm ---Test Vid:


This is pre-textured, pre-evnironment, pre-post.

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Not bad! The landing looked great, but something seemed off about the takeoff

davdud101:
I see it; it's the 'slowness' of his lift-off... THanks for pointing it out, Cori. Hopefully I can resovle the problem. Thanks for feedback, too.

Janro:
Pretty neat davdud!

I think the slowness is part of what seems off. I like how you're trying to put in antic(ipation) in the movement. One thing you could try doing is to point the front end down, rather than have the front end up. This I think would be a better antic for a forward jump.

You can try seeing it in how your body prepares for a forward jump. When you crouch bracing to go forward, you'd lean to shift your weight forwards so that you'll be 'balanced' when you leap forward.

I hope that made sense ^^

Josmic8or:
This would be hard to vote!
All the robots look great!

Janro:
I know, I haven't been particularly active and whatnot, but I gotta ask:

What happened to this challenge?

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