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Dager:
look tihs is my new modeling, it's a nud woman  ::)  please coment my work.
in progress...


ENSONIQ5:
Nice work.  I assume it is a slight caricature, with the extremely exaggerated leg length, especially once she has feet.  Also the upper arm seems a little thin and cylindrical.  There also seems to be something a little odd around the knee, although a different camera angle might clear this up.  So far though, nice modelling.

hihosilver:
The legs do seem too long.  Are you using reference images?  If not, I would definitely advise it.  It's very hard to work freehand.  Even if you don't want to copy a picture, you can draw something yourself then model if off of the references.
As I said, the legs look too long, the model also doesn't seem to have a defined knee which you may want.  It does look like a good start though, don't get me wrong.
Lastly, could you post a wireframe?  That's one of the big things with organic modeling, so that we can look at the edge looping.

Tanzim:
about the long legs, are you doing 3D anime or something?

Dager:
i'm not think " too long legs" because i used image reference style comic/manga, in this case is usually have long legs, I try to improve my modeling abilities ;D , I Not well understood what you said Tanzin ??? ,( sorry  i'm brazilian
and my English is weak ), I think you asked for what purpose I am modeling,Well, actually it is for games, as a training... I would like to work with games. and hihosilver i will post the wireframe.

thanks!

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