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Rainbow Factory

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fromsoysauce:
You don't need to worry about copy right stuff. Really. Especially since it's fan work.

IMO, it would look about 20% cooler if it were made of brass instead of aluminum.

CoriDavis:
I figured it was supposed to be steel.  the fanfic says " At the top of the stack was a single opening, red with rust despite the rest of the machine to be shiny and clean." and I don't believe Brass can rust. (Even though the 'rust' turned out to be blood in the end, but it wouldn't be suspected to be rust if it was brass I would assume).

This is the description of the machine:
"It was fairly open and empty, almost like an theater room. At one end of the room, there was six square vats, (oops, I made them round...) each one nearly full with individual Spectra. Above them was a peculiar looking machine. From a central stack, six hoses broke off and lead above each of the individual vats. At the top of the stack was a single opening, red with rust despite the rest of the machine to be shiny and clean. Even further above that was a fairly complex looking object, with chains and gears hanging off of beams and pipes loosely. (How am I going to make chains, especially chains that will be able to move?) Running even higher than the whole machine was a length of scaffolding, with doors on either side leading out of the room."

fromsoysauce:
Oh, well OK then. Didn't know you were going off the fic only. I thought you were basing it off Wooden Toaster's song.

CoriDavis:
Well I am trying to base it as much on the fic as possible.  It does show brass things in the BronyDanceParty PMV and the Rainbow Factory picture kind of looks brassy I guess.  I was going by what I imagined when I read the description and what made sense.  (and I looked up the brass thing. It can't rust, it just tarnishes)

fromsoysauce:
*Shrug*

What I mean to say, is the machine doesn't look mean enough. And I think making it brass is one way to make it look more evil.

It is the Rainbow Factory after all.

Somehow you need to make it invoke a much more creepy atmosphere.

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