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almost cool:
Yeah i see your point,ill get started on that.ill make the eyes look more realistic by puttin a transparent lens with a subtle env map.and make it scarier,but cuter.

almost cool:
Heres a better eye color,and that newborn flesh color.plus a bumpmap for skin.Should i get started on the figure or does the head need more adjustments?

thecolclough:

--- Quote from: almost cool on April 24, 2008, 12:54:30 pm ---Should i get started on the figure or does the head need more adjustments?
--- End quote ---

depends what it's going to be?  the mouth probably wants a bit of work (make it less square, and a bit darker inside), and it could use some eyelids.  and depending on species, it may or may not want some ears.  if it's supposed to be something scary, then slant the eyelids down in the middle to make it look more ferocious, and maybe add a couple of little baby fangs.  :o  as a general rule, things like eyes and ears, especially eyes, are proportionally larger in baby creatures than they are in the adults of the same species.

personally, i'd shift the colour a bit more towards pinky-red rather than orangey-red, but thats just a taste difference, i think.

and just as a little side issue, almost_cool, it makes your writing clearer if you leave spaces between your sentences.rather than doing this :)

sorry to reel off so many things at once - hope you don't feel too swamped!  :P

- colclough

almost cool:
no prob 8), have it done in a few seconds. It shouldnt be ferocious I just want it to be scary and have room for it to be cute. (If I dont than the egg being golden would be kinda pointless.)

almost cool:
Done :P here it is,i redid the bumpmap 2 make it more lack of pigment,did i go overboard?

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