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Space Series Idea
spicy:
No it wasn't a secret, I said earlier that we was going to use MakeHuman and the ONLY raeson I am using it is to make results more faster and effienct thats all. And hihoslilver I understand what your saying and I have modelled my first hand (Ages ago), but I am still going to use MakeHuman. So then what do we think to the script? No one except wolven anim8or has commented on it.
hihosilver:
The script looks fine.
The only issue I saw was where you wrote, "Captain Matthews: Good! The last time they was with another ship their engines cut off and it was a week until they were fixed!"
The "was" here should be "were" for proper grammar.
devilGames:
Good pointer, i noticed that to. And, i was referring to the script. I thought you didn't want people to know about the story line etc.
spicy:
O yeah I just noticed that, thanks guys! And it's only the beggining part of the script and does not contain any important parts of the story line, meaning its not an important scene its more like an introduction scene
startrekfan001:
regarding the text: i have the idea that spicy is not native english or american, since the text overall is a bit filled with errors. maybe you should assign someone native english to correct all grammar mistakes?
(not wanting to be picky, but if you hear bad grammar in the movie or so, it looks kind of clumpsy)
not me btw :-P i'm dutch, i make just as much mistakes.
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