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Dosser:
Hello all,
I just finished a model I've been working on. It's a Mayan-inspired pyramid. It has 992 points, 1572 faces. Like all my models, it might be used in a game (if I get around to it  :) ) so the faces are all triangles, and was trying to get it as low poly as possible.



Please criticise the crap out of it :D

Tanzim:
OK, I will work my way up.
The background picture insults your pyramid (I see it as a temple), it's better to get a plane and add a texture, it wont look so blurred.
The stairs in the middle are too blurred, why not actually make some instead of getting a texture?
And the bit at the top has nothing inside it, what did you do, extrude a cube?
Hope I wasn't too harsh.
But I like how you added the green at the bottom to look like moss so as to add age to the building.
*sniff sniff* uh, criticized too hard!

mcheccyb:
why is it in tri's?

quads are much better.

spicy:
Yeah i agree with Tanzim with mostly everything there except for the:

--- Quote from: Tanzim on June 11, 2008, 07:33:49 am ---OK, I will work my way up.
*sniff sniff* uh, criticized too hard!

--- End quote ---
That made me laugh! But i am fimilar with these temples and you have done a good job! just a little more work on the textures and your away! Lovely model though!
-spicy

lynn22:
Overall it looks nice, except for the background - Tanzim's solution would look better - and the cube (temple ?) on the top looks a bit small compared to the size of the bannister at the top of the stairs.

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