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PLanAhead:
I've made some updates

More detail to the model.
Lense flare effect as model passes the sun.
Suspension on the car and dust trail (Terranim8or)
Impact when robot lands in the dirt.

Dosser:
very nice: how did you do the transformation itself?

A criticism: it looks very professional and all. However, it looks like the huge lens flare when it passes the sun covers up the major transformation. Perhaps that was intended, and it does look good, just that it would be nice to see the actual transformation take place.

PLanAhead:
Thank you
Its actually 3 seperate figures.

More detail and image of the bone structure here
As well as the animation without the lenseflare and up close:
http://www.anim8or.com/smf/index.php?topic=657.0

If I ever get around to it I have a story that will involve another car/robot and more transformations.
But who knows if I will pursue it.

hihosilver:
That looks like a great improvement.  The additional effects with the dirt look great.
Here are my crits as always ;)
First, the suspension is great, but I think it could move a lot quicker.  It seems too slow right now, and it should jerk up and down very very quickly instead of smoothly (the point is that it's bumpy ;).)
Next, when he lands with the nice crouch, the way he stands up isn't that good.  He seems to slide when he does that.  His feet slide under his body when he stands.  As always though, the actual transformation looks great.  Perhaps some slow-motion in there would look cool (that's just me though, I always think slow motion is epic).
Great job so far.  I really love this animation.

spicy:
I love it! I love the transformation (hence Transformer revisited). I love the suspension and the part when the camera goes past the sun and the lights shining in our faces :)

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