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Finished Works and Works in Progress / Re: Makmat 160mm (Mobile Artillery)
« on: September 25, 2008, 10:24:39 am »
Looks pretty accurate so far, I like you progress 
Some of the smaller details aren't dead-on (like the rivet heads between the treads, the original has two circular indentions and a long thin bump on the top), but that's getting anal
The texturing is alright, can't complain too much there except that the only real way to make it look better would be to customize it a bit and add dirt and wear and tear, like in the original. You should also add another sand-colored light source facing from the ground to give it some backlight and make the render a little more realistic. Generally you should have two or more lights in a lighting setup if you want to go for more than a basic render.
Keep it up!

Some of the smaller details aren't dead-on (like the rivet heads between the treads, the original has two circular indentions and a long thin bump on the top), but that's getting anal

The texturing is alright, can't complain too much there except that the only real way to make it look better would be to customize it a bit and add dirt and wear and tear, like in the original. You should also add another sand-colored light source facing from the ground to give it some backlight and make the render a little more realistic. Generally you should have two or more lights in a lighting setup if you want to go for more than a basic render.
Keep it up!
