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siragin

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court yard
« on: February 16, 2009, 11:53:06 pm »

just showing something im working on for a tv series im doing. Its far from done but is there anything i can do to make it better, or anything I should fix?
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Re: court yard
« Reply #1 on: February 17, 2009, 01:14:53 am »

scale that texture way down or use a different one for that walkway thing. its way too big. other than that it looks pretty good. keep it up
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Re: court yard
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2009, 02:40:42 am »

I agree that the walkway texture is too low resolution and oddly sized.  The same goes for the grass texture.  The building's proportions look good, though I think some different lighting could spice the image up a bit.
Good start, I look forward to your improvements.
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Re: court yard
« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2009, 10:28:20 pm »

here is a small up date. I changed the walk way.
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Re: court yard
« Reply #4 on: February 20, 2009, 03:26:43 am »

yea that looks way better. good job
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Re: court yard
« Reply #5 on: February 25, 2009, 12:10:32 am »

well I think its time I started adding the characters to this scene. I added a few more lights and I added a sky dome with a cloud texture.
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Re: court yard
« Reply #6 on: February 25, 2009, 04:23:08 am »

I personally think the cloud(s) are too big, although if you were too make them a bit more opaquer then it might look realistic.
Good work with the lighting though, it seems really sunny now.
You might still want to work on the grass texture, looks a bit odd at points such as near the footpath where the color suddenly changes.
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