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[mak]

crits and coms welcome please.

[Pincho]

Yeah, I like it. Keep making them, maybe have a really good storyboard for the next one.

[Arik_the_Red]

well that was pretty cool! How long have you been working on it? I mean, of course there are crits that can be had, but I think all in all that's a pretty mean accomplishment!

[johnar]

  Massive. That was so cool and it must've taken a lot! of work.
 I don't get a lot of chances to watch much on the internet, but am sure glad i got to watch that one.

 Nice one mak.  

[ENSONIQ5]

Excellent work Mak!  Finished videos from Anim8or users are as rare as rocking horse poop, so it's great to see one finished.  The story was great, and a real standout was the little physical comedy moments, like the wobby fence.  None of the scenes seemed rushed and your "directorship" is outstanding.  The only things I would point out that could be better in future projects, aside from the slightly awkward walk cycles, would be your materials, lighting and backgrounds.  It looked overall a little flat, lacking in texture, but it is also clear that the cartoony look was what you were deliberately going for.  Really excellent work Mak, looking forward to seeing more!

[Khaspah]

Hey! I remember those rythms and sounds from a program I had years ago. What was its name? :-)

By the way, great work. I love the cartoony style, specially the face of the thief the first time he sees the dog. Reminds me some characters from The Secret of Monkey Island :-)

I can´t give you "technical" c&c´s because I have very limited skills with Anim8or. So my only crit is that the owners of the house doesn´t look like the other characters... less "cartoony", as if they were part of another project...

Anyway, congratulations. I loved it!!!

[mak]

thanks guys. how long it took is hard to answer acurately. i started it a cople of years ago, but then would drop it for a few months. then pick it up, get frustrated then drop it again.
 lighting has always been a week point for me. theres something about i just dont get, in fact this was the first time i made myself realy give it a go. i followed a couple of tuts and i agree i think i need to follow some more.
the rythms; i think it was called "rock rap n roll" i wonder if theres copy right infringements here? hope not.
the owners of the house are from another project, the man i didnt model at all, he was a free download from somewhere. but i put clothes on him and rig him. she was a modified model johnar put out a long time ago. it feels like cheeting not use your own stuff but they wernt realy the main point of the story so i just didnt want to concentrait on them much.
thanks guys this very incuraging.