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Author Topic: The Streets  (Read 7529 times)

Mreenav D

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The Streets
« on: October 15, 2010, 02:11:32 pm »

ok..im back here after a long time.this is a simple street for a nightime illumination test .i know that the benches are a bit cranky but my emphasis was on lighting more than modelling.Any criticism will be highly appreciated.

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Re: The Streets
« Reply #1 on: October 15, 2010, 03:08:16 pm »

Umm... critism.. hmm... I GOT IT!

IT LOOKS STUPID AND HORRID! I WOULD RATHER LOOK AT A PILE OF DOG POO!
Just kidding

I really like the look of it, except its quite dark (even in the focal point).
One thing that for sure can help the scene to make it look more realistic is infact, imperfectness or even clutter. Try adding in some cracks in the wall or a drain pipe or possibly a newspaper on the ground etc.
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Re: The Streets
« Reply #2 on: October 15, 2010, 03:56:42 pm »

makes me wonder, whats behind that wall??
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Re: The Streets
« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2010, 03:43:35 am »

Ok ,here's a little mod.
@cooldude: good observation,its too neat.will dirty it up a bit later
@kreator: empty space
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Re: The Streets
« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2010, 12:15:47 pm »

one thing i noticed is the textures are a little stretched out. you might want to scale them down a bit.
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Re: The Streets
« Reply #5 on: October 18, 2010, 12:53:46 pm »

mia_material rocks! i was making a simple skateboard to dump in the street and decided to do a test render, in mental ray.And i came up with this cool render
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Re: The Streets
« Reply #6 on: October 21, 2010, 05:58:28 pm »

Ooohh shiny  :D

It looks really good, I hope the final renders  look even better, if thats possible  ;)
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Re: The Streets
« Reply #7 on: October 26, 2010, 04:46:50 pm »

hey Mreenav, on the first one it looks really cool but the textures could be a wee bit higher quality. the skateboard it absolutely beautiful, and i agree with cooldude, i hope the final is even better! good work so far!
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