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[tobbe654]

i havent used anim8or a lot, so this i one of my first projects, but i think its gonna be great



i need to fix the mouth and make som ears.

comments..?

[thecolclough]

it's a bit lumpy in places, but it looks like you've got the basic proportions about right.  good start

- colclough

[Wolven anim8or]

I think thats pretty good, ive been doing animator for about 6 months and i could never even do that

[spicy]

Good for a newb, looks a bit bumpy, the mouth looks a litlle to big. Good start though

[EcoTyler]

Lookin good for a start,You might wanna use the non-uniform scale on the Y-axis cause it's lookin skinny,And try and get rid of the lumpy places,Other than that it looks pretty good

[Tanzim]

Mate, work on the nose and chin, and push in the eyes.
Could we see a wireframe so we can give better crits?

Otherwise, good work

[tobbe654]

here is a wireframe..

[spicy]

thanks for the wireframe. The nose needs to be bigger, it's to small andit needs to be raised a little. The chin looks a little to big as well as the mouth, but it might just be the chin making the mouth look big.

[RudySchneider]

You should really pay attention to edgeloop topology.  UpholsteredDave has a good example on this thread:  http://anim8or.org/forums/index.php/topic,820.0.html

[Tanzim]

At least you've made a start around the eyes!

[falloffalot]

Wrap an old mummy type bandage texture around that face with glowing red eyes and you'll have a pretty scary head for a cool horror scene.
Also give it a scarecrow style body would look really creepy.