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[Stinky]

Hey guys, The "subject" is self explanatory...keep giving me feedback please.
I really appreciate it.

[thecolclough]

much better with the radiator.  now i'd say you want to focus on the lights, it'd probably look best if you make them very transparent, and model a bit to go inside them, with a high-specular silver material.

- colclough

[Tanzim]

Could we see some more views on parallel projection (non-perspective)?
It looks like a sub-division object. because the side-mirrors look too round. Also add lights, work on the wheels, and add doors.
Otherwise, intense ride, homie!

[Stinky]

nope, no subdivision here...i modelled the entire thing with face extrusion and tweaking points
... But thats for the critisism guys. I'll get to work as soon as i get a chance.

Later..

[devilGames]

The rims look to flat, like a piece of paper with a drawing of a rim had been stuck on the tires instead of actual rims. Also the lights need a big fix, they're black, but letting off light? That needs tweaking, otherwise a nice job. (I know, better than i can do)

[falloffalot]

The front looks very cool now. Devilgames is right the arches need to more flared and the wheels need a little work. But still a very nice model.

[Stinky]

ok... so i havent really made any changes to the car ... just experimenting with reflections here

[floyd86]

Looks good! What kind of reflection did you use? Also try to make the car itself reflect, this will give a nice effect and more realism.

[Stinky]

in Anim8or 0.97, i used the "glossyreflector" attribute and set a "Kr" of 1... set a Diffuse value of 0, so that the lights wouldn't put a glare on the surface and then rendered using the ray-tracer...