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H.:
I'm now finally through it !

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I'm open to any kind of feedback.

Enjoy!

Tanzim:
Pretty funny.
Animation (character and lamp) was pretty good, although at times it was too sudden and looked unnatural, such as when the character fall over and then gets up so fast into what I assume is the position you modeled it in.
Also, personally I didn't like the camera going out of the scene and then showing the ground grid, of course it's up to you how you want to show the credits (as well as everything else).

But, again, nice work.

lynn22:
Very nice first project, keep at it :)

Overall it's a bit on the dark side and details get lost, so maybe add a soft overall light but do keep the lamp light as main impact source. Just a suggestion.

falloffalot:
Nice concept with simple, smooth animation.
Are you considering adding sound fx?

H.:
Thanks for your replies!
I don't think that I will change anything, because I need something more colorful now after three months of grey tubes :)

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