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Gouda

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johnar:
 Nice one ronaldefarmer
 Same comments as above. Some more texturing, some holes and a few other imperfections would help towards realism.
 Is your daughter also modelling a gouda?, and if so, do you think we'll get to see hers?... ;)

ronaldefarmer:
Good pointers everybody, here is another attempt.



Johnar: My daughter's gouda was done in Adobe Illustrator so I won't post it here. You can see it on my webpage if you want. Click the graphic that says "Gallery" and scroll down to the last picture. Incidentally, I saw your video "The Seed That Turned" for the first time recently--very entertaining!

neirao:
nice job!!

ENSONIQ5:
Amazing how just a few small things can make such a difference.  The softer edges on the cheese definitely communicate its texture better, in the first image it looked more like cut apple with the crisp edges.  The debris on the knife blade and the cheese label are nice touches, and I should say that the wax material is absolutely spot on.  This is a really nice image, deftly done!  One final point: While the bricks are ok being out of focus, I would consider a more detailed texture for the table top.

johnar:
Your latest image is definately improved by the last tweaks. Nice one.

Had a look at Mirandas'.
 I like the picture, nice one Miranda, but can't help but comment on the difference between a picture of a 3D model and a standard 2D picture.
 Even if you made yours a 'cartooney' type image, there would still be more apparent 'depth' and therefor 'realism' in the final pic?. (i'm assuming really, but probably not far from the truth).
 And agree with ENSONIQ5, and maybe consider a more detailed texture for the table top.
 
 Regards seed that turned. Thanks for the comment. Glad you found it entertaining.
 It was my longest video for some time, but then about 5 years ago i came up with 'Eart', which clocks in at just under 10 minutes.

 (free plug for a video which i was never that happy with, lol)
  Visiting your webpage is inspiring me to finish mine. (has been half done for several years)
Anyway, enough about that.
 Nice Gouda Ron.
 Mirandas has a mouse, which is also a nice touch.

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